this is wonderful! i love the part where jane imagines her and jester by the water. i love how determined jane is to make things right and her selfless attitude to helping people! thank you for writing, i loved reading this chapter and am excited to see what happens next ! 🌟
I’m on absolute pins and needles after this chapter. Gunther stepping out of the shadows like that… what’s he going to do now? Is he finally going to stand up to his piece‑of‑dragon-poop 🐉💩 papa, or is he going to slip back into scaredy‑cat mode? And Jester — I’m terrified for him. That surgery sounds brutal, even with Dragon giving up a scale. I’m also wondering how Sir Theodore, Cathgin, Master Gorga, and Robert are going to cut that scale to size without Jane’s sword… and how Jane is going to get it back now that Magnus and his men have it. This whole chapter has me buzzing. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
Hey, Dragon Fan 2006 here. First to comment on this Rollercoaster ride. Another incredible chapter, Martin. The tension in this one is unreal — Jester fighting for his life, Dragon giving up a scale for the surgery, and Jane torn between her heart and her duty. The moment she finds the herbalist’s cave ransacked and her own sword used as the break‑in tool hit hard. And that final reveal with Gunther stepping out of the shadows… absolutely gripping. Talk about cliffhangers. You've got me hooked. I love where this is going and what you're putting these characters through. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
What an amazing chapter!
I can definitely tell that Jane is feeling guilty and wants to set things right.
I am interested in how they will use Dragon’s scale for the surgery, but wouldn’t they have to double check if it’s sanitary to use first?
My heart does break for Jester and hope that he’ll be able to fight through, and maybe he and Jane can have a proper talk about things.
I’m rather curious on how Jane plans on getting her sword back.
But a great chapter nevertheless.
this is wonderful! i love the part where jane imagines her and jester by the water. i love how determined jane is to make things right and her selfless attitude to helping people! thank you for writing, i loved reading this chapter and am excited to see what happens next ! 🌟
I’m on absolute pins and needles after this chapter. Gunther stepping out of the shadows like that… what’s he going to do now? Is he finally going to stand up to his piece‑of‑dragon-poop 🐉💩 papa, or is he going to slip back into scaredy‑cat mode? And Jester — I’m terrified for him. That surgery sounds brutal, even with Dragon giving up a scale. I’m also wondering how Sir Theodore, Cathgin, Master Gorga, and Robert are going to cut that scale to size without Jane’s sword… and how Jane is going to get it back now that Magnus and his men have it. This whole chapter has me buzzing. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
Hey, Dragon Fan 2006 here. First to comment on this Rollercoaster ride. Another incredible chapter, Martin. The tension in this one is unreal — Jester fighting for his life, Dragon giving up a scale for the surgery, and Jane torn between her heart and her duty. The moment she finds the herbalist’s cave ransacked and her own sword used as the break‑in tool hit hard. And that final reveal with Gunther stepping out of the shadows… absolutely gripping. Talk about cliffhangers. You've got me hooked. I love where this is going and what you're putting these characters through. Can’t wait for the next chapter.